1) Add link to music video 2) Inter textuality: You need to add links to similar generic music videos. 3) Focus on aspects of mise-en-scene rather than a generalised explanation of the pop genre.
Suggestion:
Take screen shots from the music video - link to a specific genre theory, and add screen shot from similar music video of same genre and compare or contrast.
Rather undeveloped and limited analysis of aspects of mise-en-scene to indicate a convincing understanding of genre.
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2) Inter textuality: You need to add links to similar generic music videos.
3) Focus on aspects of mise-en-scene rather than a generalised explanation of the pop genre.
Suggestion:
Take screen shots from the music video - link to a specific genre theory, and add screen shot from similar music video of same genre and compare or contrast.
Rather undeveloped and limited analysis of aspects of mise-en-scene to indicate a convincing understanding of genre.
Nicely organised but to few specific examples.